Dancing Dolls

I extend my hands,
He holds them tight.

We break-free our hands
move a feet back
then, come front together.

Again our hands unite
We take each step together
being reflection of each other.

Both of us bend low,
greet and thank.
Both of us smile
Who is the happiest?

Author's Note

I would say that both of them are equally happy.

Be it anyone's initiative to re-unite the hands by putting aside their ego to bring back the other, the happiness is equally received by both.

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Made for each other, both are happy

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good work..!!!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Really well done poem!It made me smile.Thanks :)

[Lively]

Tranquility are the basic necessity of the world today.

[Audrey Howitt]

So well done! Loved this poem! I can feel the somewhat jerky motion of the dolls as they come together in your rhythm! Lovely!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A well penned piece, well done

[Judas Hammer]

LOL I like your style........you stay true to your form

[Aurora Lynn]

A very nice and lovely poem. Well done.

~Aurora

[Ruth]

I would say both! This is lovely.....reflecting each other is not easy and when it happens, is glorious xx