Dreamy Girl

Dreamy Girl

A Poem by sushi

When its' harder to speak,
let the silence remain,
let the suspense grow.

You be besides me,
I will close my eyes
and feel your presence.
You conclude I am asleep,
and I will pour my heart's content
as if talking in sleep.

© 2011 sushi


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good nice one

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good work..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write. Love the depth in writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh!Lovely Sushi!!That is so..deep and refreshing to read!Loved it!Thank you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely!
So visual that it was like watching a video
Two people, so close, yet so far apart, inhabiting two separate worlds
I enjoyed your word-feast!

Posted 12 Years Ago


After writing "Sacrificed on belief", i get scared to see my write crossing half of the page. Lol........

Now a days im trying hard to write short and sweet poems... Im Happy that you all enjoyed it...

Thanks for the review and encouragement...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very lovely and beautiful poem. You should add more in it. It has the potential to attract readers.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Almost begs to be read more and more, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree with Devil's Angel,it's nice, but incomplete.

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOL simple but nice!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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sushi

Pune, India



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