Old Friend

We were once close

to each others sides,

until that fateful day.

The day you left

for someone else,

the woman you call bae.

You used to laugh

at all my jokes,

but now we are apart.

I now no longer

have a special

place inside your heart.

The warm wind whispers

with my breath

a tear rolls down my cheek

I sit there skipping

broken stones,

down by our favourite creek.

We cherished each others 

touch for years,

always talked on the phone.

But now you're gone

and here I sit

legs crossed, and all alone.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Sad but a part of growing up in the world now a days. Valentine

[terry smith]

Love this!!!! I to have missed the bliss of friendships kiss.:)

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Hurts to even read it. Nicely put together.

[dan]

A very poignant and personal write. To lose a dear friend is often more traumatic than losing a love; a friendship may have lasted many more years than a love that ends. Very nicely done. take care...dan

[ANTO]

Wow - such heartbreak. Such poignant memories conveyed in great imagery.
Truly moving write dear poet.