Feel our ONENESS

You are one of my kind,
Hence, you are bound to be mine.

Oh my friends, please don't fight,
Every thing would be soon all right.

Show love for each and every one,
Then look how beautiful is this magical world,
Rather than hunting,
Feeling love is a special fun.

Letters together form a sentence.
Either of them missing,
Makes it very hard to maintain.

Will stay together, till we are here,
But before me don't try to disappear

We are different by colour and face,
We are not two or three, we are same.

We are humans and we are one,
Together we are never outrun.

Take care !

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

We must grasp the things that we share in common to learn tolerance and peace for our differences knowing that beneath it all we each bleed and cry and laugh and love and hurt and long for the acceptance and appreciation of our brothers and sisters. Bless you for putting this into words. The feeling here is lovely.

[The They]

We are Same.

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Such beautiful imagery and expression in this amazing write.

[Dayran]

A balanced appeal for harmony by someone very familiar with the art. Well done!

[K.C. Zbryk]

I love the optimism in this piece and the heartfelt message. If more people thought like this the world may just be a simpler place. Fantastic writing

[Little Birdie]

Great message. We should stick together instead of hurting each other.

[Amila Jay]

Great write:)

[Coyote Poetry]

"We are humans and we are one,
Together we are never outrun.

Take care !"
These are true and good words. Belief of many people of this world and I wish for all people of this world. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

People do share many things - including "Needs", flaws, and emotions. Few share a tolerance for differences - even when they SAY they do.

Poetry is seldom just a visual art form... its meant to be read aloud. By doing that we gain a sense of composition, rhythm and flow, where pauses NEED be to gain the most understanding of the content, and for clarity. I read EACH work aloud - three times BEFORE I think of a review or comment.

Sagar, you've things you feel the need to express... and its worth YOU'RE effort to continue doing.

Take care
Chris

[Lin-J]

a lovely piece of writing x

[Demi Rose]

lovely and full of soul