Moment to grow!

I'm growing day by day without a pause,
So are my hairs, growing for a cause.

Growth is a natural phenomena.
Wise and subtle thoughts,
Adds it to your persona.

Work hard as the dark black crow.
Along with efforts and karma,
You will grow.

All that you have today will grow old some day.
'But will go away from you'
Is quite hard to say.

Your strive and dedication for it,
Will help you to grow.

If you think for a win or lose,
It may induce you,
To add more pain in your bruise.

Enjoy every moment,
Enjoy as you play,
You won't know,
When is your turn to fly towards ray.

Reviews

[Little Birdie]

Very pretty :)

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Wonderful write

[Thrinna Mae]

I don't know why I felt so inspired while reading this...I especially like the last stanza...Great work!
:)))

[Amila Jay]

Nice poem:)

[Dayran]

A song of the fleeting experience, engaged in by youth, when they see clearly enough that it will leave on growing up. In comparison, someone older would be clinging on to everything, lest it leaves. Keep writing old boy.

[Birdman313]

enjoyed your poem

[Arielle Ann]

strangest truth-we all know we are going to die one day or the other...but we never realize that in our day to day life as we age everyday...this is what runs the world!!!
you have vividly expressed this in your write...beautifully done :)

[Lily Mae]

So truthful and beautifully stated.. I love it..xo

[Coyote Poetry]

"Along with efforts and karma,
You will grow."
A wise person make a mistake once. Love and kindness is the good road. I enjoyed your positive and strong poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poeticpiers]

WE mature as we grow towards the inevitable cessation of life as we know it
Perhaps that is the purpose of our existence. As humans in a series of lives.