Self Obsessed Relation!

Every now and then I'm trapped in my own thoughts,
Please don't suggest me anything unless asked,
Don't try to make my life miserable,
I enjoy being my alone every second.

Don't try to involve me,
In your confused ideas,
They sound too foolish,
Never found them ideal.

I know one person,
Truly, Completely,
I'm always honest to,
That's only me.

It's better I live,
In my sweet dark corner,
Don't act to get close,
Your shadow lie in your lows.

I may sound harsh,
But I really don't care,
I'm dead for all these,
I'm trying my best to be fair.

I have no commitments,
No specific goals as such,
No plans nothing,
It's worthless to think about me.

I don't think either of us,
Should feel sorry for these,
We are expressing ourselves,
It's understood before it creates a mess.

Don't cry now,
It's of no use,
Do something better,
Before giving any excuse.

That's all from me,
You always liked to hear.
Let's turn the page,
With a smile on our face.

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

this was straight to the point...i often feel the same "JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!"...we don't need false show of affection and words...how I hate artificiality...anyways that's my comprehension...coming back to your write- "I LOVED IT"...am adding it to my favs...I cant find words to say why or how much I liked it!!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I can identify with this one. There is wisdom and absolute truth in this. I really enjoyed reading it.

[Demi Rose]

i can definitely identify with this piece.

[Amila Jay]

Nice write:-)

[Lily Mae]

Very powerful and direct write.. well done..x

[Little Birdie]

Very good work. One of those poems that I can really find myself in.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Don't cry now,
It's of no use,
Do something better,
Before giving any excuse."
A interesting poem. Many types of wall we can create. I have been lucky. I would talk to anyone and learn to understand. Each of us want more or less. We need to find some kind of peace in our life. Thank you for sharing the thoughts provoking poem.
Coyote

[J. J. Nightingale]

SOMETIMES IT IS HARD TO GET A "GOOD-BYE" ACROSS TO SOMEONE ELSE .. SOMETIMES WE MUST GET "INVOLVED" .. WE CAN LEARN FROM EVERY EXPERIENCE ..

INTERESTING THOUGHTS .. J.

[Enigmatic Soul]

That was a well-crafted poem. I loved it more because I, and so many others, can easily relate to these sentiments. Well done.

[Kes]

I like it. :)
It feels like me when I read it. It relates to me.
Great poem.