Beauty in her!

She looked like a blossom tree,
When I saw her in a wedding dress,
Remembered an angel whom I heard,
All my childhood in old fairy tales.

Her beauty repelled shine,
More like a glossy touch,
Temptations circling my mind,
To kiss her lovely perch.

I stared at her eyes,
Till I sore mine,
Searching foolish reasons,
Behind my crooked rhyme.

Just as I felt her,
I found her moving away,
Helter skelter,
With her mental array.

She was like an air,
Whom I could never grasp,
Mostly felt around me,
As her presence is quite vast.

Later I pulled, my thought quite long,
Soon as I felt, she proved me wrong,
Whether to call this one,
A haze or some foolish song!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

People come and go. It is the budget on time and life. We must learn from each other and hope to meet again. The poem is beautiful. I like the beginning. The description create good vision and thoughts. I did like the ending. A bit of a twist to the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Amila Jay]

A great write :))

[Gurdeep...The Lost<>]

This is a very feeling-depicting work...nic one....)

[Kes]

Great write, keep up the hard work!
K