Beyond it!

Search for lost keys continue,

Till it turns dark,

Words which are untrue,

Will never sound smart.

Growling sound from inside,

Is bound to last long,

It's a spoof for humans,

When they strive for things hard.

Past remains a dreaded sea,

Present is like a green tree,

Future is what we would like to see,

Or what we force ourselves to be.

It's not easy to pass through dead end,

Where cradle likes to stay for long,

It all starts turning blurry,

As rays of light start splitting their ends.

It's too quick and fast for us,

You can't see anything clearly,

Our retina can't match it's pace,

This is what we call, speed of light.

It do sound like a fictional art,

But it's not the same for me,

It's a fact that makes me worry,

There's much more to explore,

Beyond what we see!

Reviews

[Dayran]

This reminds me of a passage I read about caving. Deep in the mountains, by the light of torches, the caver encounters a stream. But in the dark gloom and the glassy transparency of the water, he can't make out how fast the water is flowing. So they throw a colored dye into the stream and find out how fast the water carries it away.

In trying to understand ourself we have to befriend an ally. Someone who will clue us in on how fast it moves. It is the dye of the cavers.

[Sagar Waingankar]

How can an ally help one? We can have a good time discussing about it but one may feel it's a waste of time for him! We are independent thinkers! It was nice to hear about the passage but it was related to measuring, how can you measure a vacant, a space that's beyond infinity?

[Dayran]

It is the ally who finds you, not you him. When the student is ready the master will come.

[Sagar Waingankar]

haha thanks!

[Rhea]

"Past remains a dreaded sea,
Present is like a green tree,
Future is what we would like to see,
Or what we force ourselves to be."
- truly genuine & an amazing piece of composition...well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

"There's much more to explore,
Beyond what we see!"
Life teaches us to not fear tomorrow. We can't fall backwards. I like your description and story in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sagar Waingankar]

Thanks brother for all your support and inspiration! Love and light!

[Little Birdie]

Your poetic might improves more and more with each poem you write, and it's such a pleasure to read your poems, each one of them strikes with such witty lines. Beautiful.

[Amila Jay]

Past remains a dreaded sea,
Present is like a green tree,
Future is what we would like to see,
Or what we force ourselves to be.

Awesome write :))

[Kes]

It seems there will always be things we don't know. Things we can't see.
If we try too hard, we end up getting lost inside our own heads - not exploring anything or anywhere unfamiliar at all.
This is a beautiful poem. It captures that confusion well.
K

[V.J.C.]

I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the read.