An Iterative Reflection

Life allowed me to glimpse the past but not the fortune,
so the shred of ocean was dwindled away into clouds to indulge the term of evaporation,
but the clouds couldn't emulate it but those were reflected in the ocean,
i was clung by the lingering past,
though teaming tears were gliding down from the skies were sheerly perplexing,
As because of the wild drizzling,
Baffled sight had bricked up an unkempt Image of mirror,
i was loosing myself,
illusion had subdued my every gesture and incarcerated me in the deceptive room,
Peeking at the erratic myself in the mirror,
I was perceptive when my image loomed,
I noticed the tear of the right eye was in the left and vice versa,
tears were the consequences of the doom,
the glinting tears reflected the clouds,
But how did the clouds drain my tears as to indulge again the term of evaporation?
wild drizzling again took place with an eerie hesitation!
Hailing from the darks clouds arose an ocean, as the resurrection!

Apparent Elements were incredulously varying from their Inceptions,

Illusion was betraying my sight with its elusive reflexion,
its all because Life allowed me to glimpse the past,
And again the shred of ocean was dwindled away into clouds,to indulge the term Iteration...

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

this was amazing...lost my words...how could you create something out of the simple process of evaporation and rain,in other words iteration - repetition...aah and I am in love with the word resurrection-its one of my favorites..wonderfully you have connected resurrection of an ocean with life & tears!

[J Todd Underhill]

I like this piece in general there is some brush up that can be done, polishing if you will to make this gem shine and sparkle!

[Dayran]

How would a person respond in a situation when he is in a fairy's dream, while he is dreaing a fairy. I would think it would be very much like your poem.

[Robbie]

You have written a very intricate piece. I had to read this twice ...there are layers to this that are very intriguing. Nice job.

[Manpreet]

I am amazed at the depth of detailing in here, I could visualize formation of tears and evaporating. Great work!

[paparapapa]

I loved how you made it sound so complicated but amazing at the same time. I can't really decode though what the colors meant. :| But anyway, you did a pretty good job. :)

[realmwriter]

Good flow with some literal tones and sad underpinnings. Very Good Indeed...!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a great write. I like the colors and the rhythm. Well done.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such a lovely poem! Written so well. It was fantastic to read! Nicely done!

[Myself]

A very beautiful write :)