Forever one

Twin soul or soul mate

What do I call you?

Does it matter?

Whatever you are,

I know you mean everything to me

Or else i would have not heard your call

Nor would you have had such impact on me

Each breath you take fills me with freshness

Each Smile of yours makes me glow

Each bruise on your body leaves a mark on mine

Is it still not sufficient to believe?

We were meant to be

One soul...Forever one.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your words speak into the souls of so many, these seeking this divine connection that is wildly beautiful and full of life. May we each find our twin soul and in so doing find our way home.

[Ardra]

Thank you craig :)
amen to that
i did find mine... he is the best of them all :) as you know...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is very beautiful, and deep and quite soulful.
Definitely a romantic and love filled piece.
I like this line: Each bruise on your body leaves a mark on mine.
What a wonderful poem, I like the picture to.
Great write :)

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot dear for your review

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[Karmee]

Aww this is wonderful,
enjoyed this.

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot dear .... appreciate your sweet review

[Robert Haigh]

Romantic and poetically expressive. Nicely penned!

[Ardra]

Thank you Robert for the kind review :)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

A very romantic note filled with absolute earnest love that knows no bounds.
A sweet note for people in love. :)

[Ardra]

Thanks fahmida for reading....appreciate you stopping by...

[Shabeeh Haider]

That's how it is Ria. Onr gets hurt and the other feels the pain.
Simply said but forcefully expressed

[Ardra]

Thanks shabeeh for reading and the review .... but sometimes they don't understand...the love we have for them...

[Shabeeh Haider]

It is sad but that is how things are. We can continue to love for this feeling is sacred and beyond our control. Hopefully one day they will realize........

[Lydia Shutter]

What a glorious poem of love this is! Beautifully written. Lydi**

[Ardra]

Thank you Lydi for the sweet review

[Ted Kniffen]

A lovely sentiment, Ria. The simplicity of language makes it work quite well. Good write.

[Ardra]

thanks a lot ted :) i do not like to complicate things... keeping it simple works for me .. guess it reflects in my creations also... always happy to hear from you

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's really a cute poem for someone really cute and small like a baby :)

[Ardra]

:) thank you....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most Welcome :)......

[Paul Bell]

Like this. We've never met, but share a bond. May the story continue.

[Ardra]

Thanks Paul for reading :)