The Falconer

The Falconer

 

You turned me loose

Unfastened my hood

And the trappings

And shooed me free.

 

Go soar with the eagles!

You shouted curtly.

Unwillingly I did

Hurt and bitter from the harshness.

 

And from my airy ascents and descents,

I see you

A solitary, desolate figure

Mired in the chaos and the madness.

 

 

I know nothing greater than this:

You set me free

Because you love me.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

great work my friend good job

[Rachelle]

Thanks, A. Amos!

[Kal]

Overall the poem is well written but what I really liked was how you ended it "You set me free because you love me".. a really good end with a very deep great meaning..

Well written and keep it up!

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This was sooo good and meaningful. Set me free, because you love me within the chaos and madness. Excellent...:).....

[Rachelle]

Perhaps one day, the falcon will fly the falconer out.

Shokran, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:).............