Infinitely 2

Infinitely 2

A Poem by Rachelle
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Glad you are safe.

"
We could sit here all day
Watching ant trails and crumbs
Or skip stones in the pond.

And not utter a word.


© 2014 Rachelle



Author's Note

Rachelle
no words. just relieved.

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And not utter a word. .......................(..)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Such a peaceful picture you have sketched here, and with just a few well chosen words. That is the mark of a poet.

Beccy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Well done! Words have their limitations. Just being aware of being in itself surpasses any words, or logic. We learn nothing of a work of art by dissecting it into its component parts, as it must be experienced as a whole to be experienced at all. Ant hills, crumbs, and skipping stones on ponds are works of art in themselves. Our world is deeper than its parts.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Aethereal!
Love the simplicity it this piece . Just by simply knowing that someone that is special is safe and in good hands makes you appreciates and noticed even the most tiniest and overlooked things in life .

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, sir! Hope you don't mind if I take time reviewing your work. It takes me some time to d.. read more
NeiL ArandA

3 Years Ago

Its totally optional .
I like the simple tranquility that often goes unnoticed or ruined by the need for words. Nicely penned Rachelle :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Shaquana!
To be able to share the silence of contentment with someone, is a universal utopia. That silence speaks more than words. Beautiful! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Prayer like and delicate, well done, good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
This wouldn't be a bad day. Sitting or tossing stones. Either one is a good day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, sir!
VERY NICE WORDLESS POEM FANTASTIC

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
We didn't plunder, we didn't ruin
we sat in silence and made existence our witness
when we fell in the moment ,we were togather

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Lovely! Thank you!

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Rachelle

Carmel, IN



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