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Author's Note

Playing with layout.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the layout...fits the poem well...but i especially like the theme...this is about Real tried and true friends.

we help each other through the bad times, then fall on the floor laughing...and only best friends are allowed to laugh, no one else...

[Rachelle]

Thank you, sir!

[Khushi]

This is really cool dear!!

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Lyn Anderson]

This is awesome. Very good.

[Rachelle]

Thank you!

[Utkarsh Singh]

a small story of best friends .......... gud one ....(y)

[Rachelle]

Okay, I revised it…. Thanks for the idea!

[Utkarsh Singh]

nice ...... now its perfect ...... (y)

[Rachelle]

Thanks, again!

[Utkarsh Singh]

u r welcome ..... ;)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice wordplay, sis. Glad you really enjoy poetry.

[Rachelle]

Naglalaro lang, Sis, while I am planning out the Big Project. Break lang muna from coding.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Lam mo, nag-research ako. Since 2010 pla meron ng sites for Pinoy writers. Dami nagpapalagay ng ADS ah. Di ba doon kumikita yun? Filipinowriters.com. Istorya.net...etc.
Cge lang, enjoy ka lang.

[Utkarsh Singh]

we slipped, tripped , picked each other up and laughed together .......it is incomplete .......
this one is complete .......

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Again fall down laughing ........ :D.....
this story proove this abbrivation..." ROFL "
heheheh ..gud one .... :D

[Rachelle]

Again:
Utkarsh = jokes

[Utkarsh Singh]

nooooo ........this time i was serious ..... :D

[icelandicblue]

Love the layout and the words. A whimsical piece that was enjoyable.

[Rachelle]

Always a pleasure to have you visit!

[Hafiz Mohammad Yasir]

you have a way of playing with words. :D why play with layout? :P

[Rachelle]

I am challenging myself to go beyond conventions and comfort zones.

[Hafiz Mohammad Yasir]

Good luck marching forward. may you go beyond the sky.

[Rachelle]

Thank you.

[Hafiz Mohammad Yasir]

I must say, I have come across a large no. of stories. but this is something. you say so much in so few words. wonderful.

[Rachelle]

Thank you, Hafiz!