Solo Flight

Solo Flight

A Poem by Rachelle
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inspired by Bhavana

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In our hearts the longing stays
A soul's cry for better days.
When love was in the palm of our hands
Readily we faced our lives' demands.
Things don't last the way we want them to be
Tides change as waves ebb into the sea.
And so, on these roads of dirt and stone
Bravely we must trudge our lifelong path alone.

© 2014 Rachelle



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Life is not really live to its fullest when its not live for others . As we grow and mature our priorities shift and change like the shifting sand . Then again even if it does become a hard and lonely road . Stand we must even if it just us ...For if we dont stand up for something . We will fall for anything and everything . For life can change with just a drop of a hat ...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Walking the path alone does not preclude us from being men and women for others, sir. As you said, .. read more
NeiL ArandA

3 Years Ago

Absolutely. Even when we are alone . In the eyes of a sovereign God . Even a minority is a majority .. read more
Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Truth in your words, sir! AMDG!
We walk our path alone sometime paths intersect but the path of our inner thoughts is ours alone.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Within this piece reverberates the longing for a past, memories that make themselves known and drag your speaker down like anchors begging to return to the sea. Indeed, things never stay the same. Prophetic words, Rachelle, well done, I enjoyed this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Tai!
In our hearts the longing stays
A soul's cry for better days.
When love was in the palm of our hands
Readily we faced our lives' demands.

You are saying it BHAVANA but mai ise LALASA ya SAMVEDNA kahunga. Very heartly write dear. Great poem, it speaks all about.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

translation?
Beautifully written poem full of emotion. Good work. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
I too am a firm believer that each one of us have to walk the path alone. People come and go leaving memories but it is only you who has to cover it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

The truth! But many are scared to do it alone.
Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, BTW.
Beautiful poem, Rechelle. Take note: 5th line; Things don't last the way want them to be / doesn't sound grammatically correct.

Posted 3 Years Ago


William Wapi

3 Years Ago

I am typing fast myself cause running I actually grammatically messed up your grammatically messed l.. read more
William Wapi

3 Years Ago

I've done it again.
Rachelle

3 Years Ago

We are tripping over our own keyboards….
When it comes down to it our trek is a truly solo one. Very interesting poem. Well done! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

We all have to do it alone. :)
Dynamic and intense, a well written piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
Thomas Fitzgerald

3 Years Ago

Your welcome.
Yeah but not forever Sis:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

:)))))))……………….

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Carmel, IN



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