More Invincible

More Invincible

A Poem by Rachelle
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On the ramparts we all stand, brave and tall
Swords drawn fearlessly, never to fall.
Bows drawn taut, bound to defend
Wills steeled to meet our mortal end.
The enemy driven to take on his spoils
Our souls bound in these temporal coils.
Our spirits are precious in His eyes
In true perfection we must arise.
Embrace the destiny meant for you.
We all know what we have to do.

© 2014 Rachelle



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Perhaps there are no temporal coils since time is an illusion brought forth by perception. Perhaps we’re continuously conscious relative to ourselves, eternally so, but our perception of time changes whereby an Earth second turns into a trillion or more Earth years where that gap in perception is called Death by those who perceive time in a more accelerated way. When time speeds up for us again, we find ourselves born into another world. We’d have no idea how much time passes between incarnations. Consciousness is eternal, though relative to perception, and it doesn’t imply the retention of memories that are left behind time and time again in worlds without end full of adventure, and intrigue.

Posted 3 Years Ago


There will come a time when we come into terms with our mortality . Definitely not during our early twenties and thirties . But age has a way of reminding us that we are not going yo be here much longer and neither forever . Its the heartbreaking reality of the fallen world that we live in brought about by the fall of man in the garden of Eden . The sooner we realize that and recognise the better we can prepare for the next life . The pharaohs had their eternal future and destinies in mind when they plan and build the great pyramids .

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

A bullet missed me by a few inches when I was in my teens. Somehow, your views change after that….. read more
NeiL ArandA

3 Years Ago

I will be on my way there ...
Our spirits are precious in His eyes ...

wonderfully penned !!! thanks fort he wonderful read

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Ahena!
We are warriors all:

Swords drawn fearlessly, never to fall.
Bows drawn taut, bound to defend
Wills steeled to meet our mortal end.

We must be strong for life will test us.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Ice!
"Embrace the destiny meant for you.
We all know what we have to do."
I like the energy and the purpose of the poem. The above lines are true. Go forward and never give up or in. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you, sir!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This was beautiful Rachelle. It is a well spoken piece for humanity. Bravo!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

thank you!
A great anthem for all human beings… we must fight for our dreams cause playing dead kills the inspiration.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
Wow!!!!! Awesome sauce:))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Bro!
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3 Years Ago

Welcome sis
Giving your life to a cause you believe in so dearly, knowing it shall reward you in the long run . . . Concise and direct, I like it. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Tai!
Beautifully written...great depth too...love your work..keep going Rachelle!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rachelle

3 Years Ago

Thank you!

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