i crave

this poem is about what i want in a man

 

 

 

 

i crave a tall

dark handsome man

with goals, a plan

a swagg a sexy but naughty

smile i crave a man with

dreamy eyes i crave a man

who wants it

who wants all of me

who loves me, every bit of me

that's what i crave

 

Author's Note

this is what i crave in a man

Reviews

[SilentDream]

I like the short, precise lines.. the lowercase too.
Sometimes it can read as a private thought shared or whispers.

Pen on!
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

[Windy]

Short and to the point, I like that in a poem. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of what you have written. ;)

[Liam]

Really interesting poem, and well done! Maybe add capital letters? Still, it was a good poem.

[Hannah!]

This is a really good poem--and I agree with Frances, a what you crave in a man/woman contest would be very interesting. I'd definitely enter. At any rate, I did enjoy this poem--although it took a few readings for me to really feel its rhythm. Good write!

[L.G. Knight]

inspiration...you should start a contest poetry contest... what you crave in a man/woman... I'd enter it... in fact I think i will go write my entry... but hey... GREAT JOB!

~Frances~