The Exact Shade of Your Eyes

You said that when I miss you

You'll be there in my mind

But baby, by now you should know

I dream in black and white

So how can I remember

The exact shade of your eyes

When, whenever I was with you

I was too busy being blind.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Short 'n' sweet review: Very nice. :)

Love can blind you like that, but do remember, to remember, the moments. ;)

[Marcie]

very creative

[Susanna F]

Thought-provoking. It seems to me that this isn't just about fading memory but also fading love. Sweet and sad.

[Angelic Surrender]

It is short and sweet. I like it :)

[M]

I loved the poem for the most part, short n' sweet as you put it. I'm not sure how the last line fits into the rest of the poem or the speaker's tone with respect to the person she is addressing.

[Harlon Rivers]

Perfect...As if it were not enough, the black and white images in my mind are braille...a language only read by my soul...

[Devon]

This is lovely.