Pheonix Rising

Pheonix Rising

A Chapter by Norma M Sutton
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Assignment for Team Renfield. Prompt: So let's have our own competition - for the best opening line in an imaginary novel.

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Exhaling tightly held breath, a gasp exploded from her lips becoming a ear shattering scream as his body fell from the heavens.  With the force of a comet he approached the earth, hugging the ground before extending massive wings and wheeling skyward once again.


© 2011 Norma M Sutton


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Norma M Sutton
Although this was for a imaginary story, is it a good enough start to make you want to read more?

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I like the imagery, but too bad you haven't written more of it - I think it would be a good story. So, yes, it makes me want to read more!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like you have found your wings and rose from the ashes of the life that was to the life that is

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 7, 2011
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Norma M Sutton
Norma M Sutton

Bostic, NC



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Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books: The First Lamb and Harry Goes To The Fair She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series: Matthe.. more..

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