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torn

torn

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
"

when you trust and the trust is torn into hatred and shame

"
stubborn illusion and croocked hallucinations
trust is not truth
but corroded by licks
and lost words when grasped and torn to halves.
leaving a gore
and unrepaired skin

no the sinners seek and saw my north
and got attracted to my field
instead of going all civilised
they went all in
maybe is my stunning walks,
terrible attracting smiles
or shy kindness
that led history bleed to date


© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)



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Great poem, friend....beautiful flow of words....and i loved it. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

6 Months Ago

thank you so much
Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

My pleasure, friend.
yeah that's how most relationships end, whether friendship or whatever. lies break every beautiful thing in you mind.
that was a very good work. well done

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very interesting read, and imagery as well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"my stunning walks,
terrible attracting smiles
or shy kindness
that led history bleed:

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It shows here that it all depends how you take things, good or bad. You can heal or injure...Excellent...:)...........

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh this is sooo nice
I loved it...and i can feel the rushing emotions in this and feeling of how ot feels when trust is broken

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting interpretation about broken trust, really unique

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Thats interesting buddy...I enjoyed it..:)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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what is truth,and trust is a state of mind,we really never completely trust anyone or anything..good write

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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The earth (Titan maphaha)
The earth (Titan maphaha)

Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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