DNA

DNA

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
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My silence betrays me like DNA simmering ere seething
Like a sickle soothing by corn
Ululating malevolence, jubilating when others gnash their teeth
Dematerializing in a realm of juvenile abhor
Oh my DNA
Oh my pulchritude and altered DNA

Forlornly receding happiness, hides in the catacombs
where it's firmness wears out and helix recoil
Bending my jollity into submission
O' my DNA
Oh my DNA.

© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)



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Sympathize with this because I too find sometimes that my DNA betrays me. I would suggest that you calm down on the vocabulary and focus on getting your point across. Loved it! Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice poem. I like it : the idea and the write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A feast of words and lines in a very creative way or ways. Excellent...Keep it up...:).............
Copying is the best form of flattery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how do you do that?urrgh! you're so good. can you teach me? you know,some tips might help. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is ridiculous and I mean that in the best way possible. There is a lot going on here in just a sliver of lines.

"Dematerializing in a realm of juvenile abhor"
I like it. It's got attitude and you did a nice job.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

1 Year Ago

Thank you...
duff

1 Year Ago

Very welcome:)
A jolting array of vocabulary... I see you are learning how to make mini-flow landscapes in your lines... That is ALL writing poems is about...! You are nailing it, and I am impressed...! Keep at it, and wonderfully penned...!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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The earth (Titan maphaha)

1 Year Ago

Thank you I was trying to copy you a bit... I mean your latest poem
Silente

1 Year Ago

I can see that...! Haha, that is why I would like to offer my help...! If you ever you want it... Lo.. read more

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The earth (Titan maphaha)
The earth (Titan maphaha)

Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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