sorry "Yum"

sorry "Yum"

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
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I copied, and stole a comment on writerscafe and the subject noticed...

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Feeling abashed by my abject conduction of action,
cascading ignorance, bizarre hulking predilection
that tediously spooked my unfathomable brain
I am sorry

Your philosophical ken unleashes drought
and understanding
that power perception positioned in my heart
and vividly vacuuming false veracity within
towering and mounting lies
I am sorry

Sorry for my right hand and pointing finger
that lured me to deliberately steal your sentence
Seeing how ideal your idea was
Forgive me
I am sorry

© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)


Author's Note

The earth (Titan maphaha)
The person is a she and i really regret

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well... you can steal any of my ideas and if i see it I will be honor to think some one thought they are worth of stealing! Any way, i think we all borrow ideas from others before us, around us, ideas that inspire us... the only thing it is kind of "ours" is just the way we "mix" the words and "cook" the idea...
here are some people that kind of think like me and put it in a lovely way: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oww7oB9rjgw&t=195s
and...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zd-dqUuvLk4


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

It's one thing to be inspired by someone's works and reword it in your own and completely another to.. read more
The earth (Titan maphaha)

6 Years Ago

Wow... thanks



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"Sorry for my right hand and pointing finger
that lured me to deliberately steal your sentence"

Nicely written, Earth.
Great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well... you can steal any of my ideas and if i see it I will be honor to think some one thought they are worth of stealing! Any way, i think we all borrow ideas from others before us, around us, ideas that inspire us... the only thing it is kind of "ours" is just the way we "mix" the words and "cook" the idea...
here are some people that kind of think like me and put it in a lovely way: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oww7oB9rjgw&t=195s
and...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zd-dqUuvLk4


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

It's one thing to be inspired by someone's works and reword it in your own and completely another to.. read more
The earth (Titan maphaha)

6 Years Ago

Wow... thanks

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The earth (Titan maphaha)
The earth (Titan maphaha)

Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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