Never give up

Never give up

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
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Maybe... you will like this writing

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The never give up rage flows within me

venomously blurring my sight... forging swords like urges

that thorn sharply, sharpened with acid like an on-going corrosion

of steel-bars with overflowing blood of a caged monster....


Then stand like it's my first stand in ding dong battles

triumphing routinely like rewinding scenes in movie spider-man...

agile, climbing concrete wall belly-bared in snake style positions

As all borders break loose in my remote tame...

cajoling legs following large stumps footsteps flamboyantly

like a crème de la crème craving for more cream of success


Then grasp tranquillity with scary scarred hands... followed by

incommunicado smiles of coming in elite positions over tribulations.

Trepidation filled, foreseeing the near zoomed future

As Muhammad...

A "blessings unto him


and finally I gather my thoughts around

in realisation

that I never gave up.


© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)



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Excellent poem, really enjoyed how you use vocabulary to paint a vivid picture. Couple of minor points. First verse second line, 'forging sords' - I think you meant 'swords'? Second verse first line. The phrase 'ding dong' felt out of place considering your elegant use of words in the rest of the poem. Otherwise, epic stuff.

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The earth (Titan maphaha)

5 Months Ago

splendid review... I wrote it trying to write using a writing style I admirer so much... and thank y.. read more



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A beautiful poem . Great to read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

5 Months Ago

Thank you Sharmila........
Excellent poem, really enjoyed how you use vocabulary to paint a vivid picture. Couple of minor points. First verse second line, 'forging sords' - I think you meant 'swords'? Second verse first line. The phrase 'ding dong' felt out of place considering your elegant use of words in the rest of the poem. Otherwise, epic stuff.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

5 Months Ago

splendid review... I wrote it trying to write using a writing style I admirer so much... and thank y.. read more
That is a great poem it needs me to read again tonight after my day to see the meaning but I love it to bits

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

5 Months Ago

thanks for stopping by

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The earth (Titan maphaha)
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Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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