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Forest and City

Forest and City

A Poem by SydneyLK
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Another 100 word piece.

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I found the notes all torn up on the stone wall.

Nothing could explain them. Lord knows I can't do it here.

They were soggy, the ink ran, indecipherable after all the rain.

The birds twittered over head, way up the tall, skinny maples.

Can you explain?

What’s there to fear?

This was inescapable, unmanned drone evil.

It carried with me everywhere I went, forest, city, you can’t shake it.

It was spring chewing at the foundation.

This revolution wasn’t televised, but it won’t be forgotten when we lose it all.  

It’s much too far to crawl. On your knees. 

© 2013 SydneyLK



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Very solid tone. It says a lot without having to say much; it's what I like to read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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This is great.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SydneyLK

4 Years Ago

Thanks!
I am very impressed. I could probably never just write a hundred but you....you can. Amazing. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SydneyLK

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the encouragement!
Be myself!

4 Years Ago

Your welcome.
I like your 100 word challenges you do, I'll have to start doing them. I liked how you described the sodden pages, I could visualize the ink running on the pages as someone picked them up.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SydneyLK

4 Years Ago

Thanks! I learned the challenge from a blogger who helped me out when I first started writing, Nate .. read more
robing123456

4 Years Ago

i tried to count the words, just to make sure. I got distracted. regardless of the number, i like it

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Added on January 23, 2013
Last Updated on January 23, 2013
Tags: Evil, Dreams, Spring, Notes, Fear

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SydneyLK
SydneyLK

Portland , ME



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