glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

A Poem by siri
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wow this crazy ahhhh crazy AHHHH sigh of relief.....scratch scratch rewind

"
water bubbles blasted and spurted
particles of green and yellow and blue
prime to create and make us believe what we think is true
blind by obliderations and sacraficed blood build up
essential life salts to burn out our eyes with others souls
destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth
 
glitched out brains responding once but thinking twice then backtracking to repeat the exact same g g g g glitched out idea
to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means
and now our eyes are oppen
seeing horror in our to do list
making SCREAMS become a normal society trait

 


© 2009 siri



Author's Note

siri
fucked my choose blast forward stop!

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Very interesting concept....I liked it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ohmy, I can't even describe the trip my brain went on
when I read this, quite amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Random, but neat idea and compressed with many motifs!

Posted 7 Years Ago


thumbs up! this is a great piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dude, that line about the confusion is what made my heart stutter.
I think that was the first time I fell in love with a poem on WC.
Feel loved, my comrade in pencils, feel loved. ^-^

Oh, and btw, I read your about me.
I really REALLY think I'm gonna like reading more of your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. The first few lines screwed with my mind, the imagery was really forceful, but in a good way.
I liked the mood of, how it fit a number of topics depending on how you looked at it. Very nicely done.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow....I love this because it just clicks with me you know?
Lol now that you've written that do u feel relieved? Yes? Me too! =D
I love where it says "destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth"
So true! Love it! *hugglez*

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whoa!! That was AGAIN very powerful and strong. *shivers due to the impact*
Great write!! Went like BAM! straight into my head...
You're great at this...!!
Excellent!! Nicely written... ^_^

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


I sense a glitch. Hmmm.
You must feel better now! ;)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


woww.
random but intense.
i absolutely love it.


This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago



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