Pure Poetry...

Pure Poetry...

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy Take Two
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A poetic thought that makes me smile

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So good to see us

together, alone, apart

upon stage of hearts.

© 2011 Tai Chi Italy Take Two


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that last line, wow, "upon stage of hearts." really nice, this indeed is small, and short and simple appearing and yet is speaks so much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm, wow! So few words that describe an entire lifetime. This is wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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actors in a time forgotten, a past revealed, a future held, your words
speak volumes, beautifully done Tai.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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so much in so little words - a stage of hearts - but the dance of humanity - nice!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Tai you said so much in three lines and the meaning I read is beautiful!

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago


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such a talent in writing so much in such a little space :)

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Added on April 19, 2011
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Tai Chi Italy Take Two
Tai Chi Italy Take Two

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