Success?

Success?

A Poem by Alice Maria

The feeling you get as you pass the finish line,
It is a feeling like no other.
It fills you with pride and accomplishment.
It gives you a sense of worth.
SUCCESS!
You scream with joy.
You glow with pride.
You see your loved ones rush towards you.
They congratulate you and embrace you.
This is the happiest day of your life.
Until you wake up,
And realize it was all a dream.

© 2017 Alice Maria


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Success is very hard to accomplish but if you accomplish what you love doing in life, then that's really success.o

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thankyou I can't wait to achieve it.
Hey!
this is wajiha nayeem the moderator for the contest '' the littlest thing that made you happy''.
And i am really happy and proud to announce you the winner for your write and u win the title ,''the most entertaining''..

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thank you, but isn't the contest still active.
Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

nah,just because i decided the winners already due to some emergency issues going on...
Very nice good picture you draw for poem it depicts the happiest moment can you please write on failing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'll try to.😄
writ rajat

6 Years Ago

Welcome you only can do
Success is most certainly a satisfying feeling when you accomplish something which you have set your heart on. The feelings you penned are all very true - glow with pride, scream with joy and the adrenaline rush is incredible.

Nice twist at the end.

Mark.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thankyou very much.
matrixmark

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome


Mark.
Oh God, I hated the end. But, I know, for sure, that you will gain success, some day. Nice poem, by the way!☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thankyou. You are very kind.
Anjali

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome!😊
Nice twist....simple and very true. I liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alice Maria

6 Years Ago

Thankyou vey much.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺

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Added on April 6, 2017
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Tags: Dream, hope, believe


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