Whatever comes out

I'm drunk and a little angry so gonna see what happens

A little booze,

a little rage

brings me here

onto this page

 

and as i write

i soon begin

to let it go

to let calm win

 

it isn't long

until i find

i have my own

peace of mind

 

i have a strength

i didn't know

i realised pain

will make you grow

 

i realised i've

a lot to give

i found a way

i could forgive

 

i do not know

what lies ahead

but i won't sleep

until i'm dead

 

for i was blind

but now i see

i'll take this lesson

out out with me

Reviews

[R E Tree]

I love the layout of this poem the short lines makes it sound so clever and the rhymes make you not forget what a incredible writer you are

[Tai Chi Italy]

This is brilliant but you will sleep young man!lol sleep is good for us, keeps us alive and kicking a*s far longer. You are so right that adversity makes us stronger, I am as strong as an oxo cube!lol Smiling at you,Tai

[O!]

You could rhyme when drunk!!....WOWIE!!! hehehe

i have a strength
i didn't know
i realised pain
will make you grow

I love how u hit bullseye here in this verse!!!...so true!!

x,
O!