The Requirements

If I told you
Everything I thought
What would you stay to find?

I want you to search me...

To know what I was,
What I am,
What I might be...

Then you might understand why.

But, you want it served
On a golden platter.
I can't apologize.
I don't swing that way


Do you share my dreams?
Can you save me from my fears?
Do you fantasize like me?
Can you strengthen my weakness?
Do you know how to compliment my assets?
Can you kiss me how I like?
Do you want to be my future?

Maybe then
Our hearts will connect
Joined together
Forever in this chaos

So...
Should our souls,
Part this plane,
Over distance and dimension,
We will belong
To each other
Someway.

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A nice write Tamme, I especial liked the ending about the souls finding each other in another realm together not seperate.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

i love your poem , you asked for the unreach , love can appear later even if not all perfect before it start :-)

[Jaclyn]

I like the doubt and skepticism laced with hope throughout this piece. I've felt this way about certain people, and while it never worked out, I always hoped and questioned again and again. Good one!

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

Tamme you wrote a very compelling piece and Ask some thought provoking questions. That gives this piece a depth that many lack. Great write the ending was so powerful and hopeful.
hugs Debby

[Robert Luna]

The feeling in this was beautifully stated and shown. I like the twisting sense of unknowning what you truly want until the end and then there must be an action put into place. You mind is always working up somethin interesting for us to visit and imagine.

Great Job!!!!!!!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

It seems at first as if you may dismiss this other one and then in the end you seem to want to accept them completely. Quite a spin for me...nice write, I truly understand many of the feelings set forth. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. We must put out there what we require, to know ourselves well if we will ever be happy with another. Well said.
Light,
Siddartha

[Tania Leigh]

"Should our souls,
Part this plane,
Over distance and dimension,
We will belong
To each other
Someway. "

The title is perfect for this piece, and I really like the ending.....well done

[Nana Carmine]

wow I really like it. It's powerful with a lot of good questions addressed in it.
I really like it. Keep writing