Enchantment

Smoother than silk...
    ...Twice as gentle
Dreaming of you...
    ...So sentimental
Living in love...
    ...I never had
Fantasies come true...
    ...Faires dance on lily pads
Kissing softly...
    ...At your nose
Happily-ever-after...
    ...The story goes.

Reviews

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is one of my favorite subjects. Fairies and fantasy work so well in this piece. A very nice Piece.
Hugs Debby

[The Outlaws' Song]

great rhyme...very sweet poem...:)

[shadadakiya]

that was very sweet good job

[Atlanta Carter]

I didn't think the rhyme would work, but it seems to, without feeling at all forced. It's light and airy. Nice work.

[Gypsy]

I love the flow of this piece. It made me smile right away. Beautiful word choice and rhythm. Great read!!

[Nana Carmine]

I love it- it's really good~

[Rain]

Now that's a unique style. I loved that piece. It had terrific flow, like a childrens story. Very nice
Rain

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

very short and sweet.... I liked it...

[Sean M. Addams]

i have to agree with everyone else this has very good flow to it ...very upbeat piece .. thanks for sharing

[Chillbear Latrigue]

I really love the poem. The last line reminds me of Vonnegut. I don't know that it was intentional, but a fitting tribute none-the-less. If I have a criticism it would be that the title wasn't worthy of the poem. Appropriate, but a bit obvious.