Deep Dream

Deep in the night
When sound lies still
There are elves that play
And pixies sing songs
Stimulating the minds' of players
To create the dreams
And send them to others.

Out they go one at a time
To waiting souls
Desiring to feel something
But afraid to remember.
The dream  is lost ...

          

 

           ...And no one knows

Reviews

[The Outlaws' Song]

Wonderful imagery!!! Lovely

[Gypsy]

I really like this piece. I live out on the mountain and this brought to mind an image of the elves and pixies coming out to play in the woods during a full moon. Great read!

[Nana Carmine]

wow I love it!
The imagery is wonderful

[Rain]

T. L..
This was excellent.
Deep in the night
When sound lies still
What a great way to describe late night silence. Lots of images of little creatures making dreams for everyone, I liked this. Rain

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

the imagery and flow of this is great.

[Sean M. Addams]

lots of nice imagery in this.. very well done.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely write...stimulating and uplifting in the mid-section with the magical creatures that abounded in the dreams of the character - nice write once again. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[Robert Luna]

I love to see such creative and imaginative piece as this. Believing in something other than what the eye can see. Into a land of magical creatures that had to exist at some time, why else would there be such wonderful tales about them if they didn't exist at some point in time. Truly a wonderful read.


Great Job!!!!!

[Emily B]

Elves, pixies, and lost souls. . . this is nice. Like a lost dream. Thanks for sending it my way.