Queen

It a power trip.

I am Queen of Fire
Do you still want to hold me?
I will singe your mind, heart and soul
Burnt to the third degree...

I am the Queen of Ice
You'll never see in my mind
I'm frozen in and out; no emotion
I live in place you can't find

I am the Queen of Metal
Try and bend me for your need
I don't move that easily
You might as well concede

I am the Queen of Stone
Do you wish to see me cry?
Weakness is not my fancy
It's just what I live by.

I am the Queen of Power
Did you think I was a frail chick?
My inner strenghth may hide
But your a*s would be easy to kick.

I am Queen of all you can't see
Ever wonder who creates you fears
I have the control-- I am the control
I am the master of your tears.

I am the Queen of the Night
Ever feel like someones watching you
I live in the shadows you can't see
It's me when you don't know who

I am the Queen...
Are you sure you want me
The last woman on Earth
That's what I'll be.
 

Author's Note

Sometimes a woman needs to let the rest of the world now exactly where they stand. :)

Reviews

[Kevin Vorshak]

I am the Queen of Power
Did you think I was a frail chick?
My inner strenghth may hide
But your a*s would be easy to kick.

I love that part, it still cracks me up. Reminds me a little of my wife.

The entire piece is really well written and I really enjoyed the comparisons of fire, ice, metal, etc... Really interesting piece. Well written.

[The Outlaws' Song]

Very powerful and straight!!!! The author's note makes it ever more powerful and interesting.
Nicely done.Very very cool!!
It needs a place in my library:):)

[Jet Lag]

love it. has power, humor, and passion.

strenghth should be strength.

great!

[Jaclyn]

Oooh, very powerful. And I'm kind of scared of you now. :) Loved it.

[Tania Leigh]

Awesome, strong, no bullsh** write......very cool, Tamme

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a well written piece that creates a lot of visuals to go with the words you wrote and they work together to weave a story aout a queen of the night. Well Done.
Hugs Debby

[Beth]

Hehehe... this was fun. I like the play on each traditional queen.

[Lydia Shutter]

Really "out there" and empowering. "the Queen" is a formiddable character. A little bit haunting. I liked it. Lydia

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done... geat imagery in this.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very powerful write indeed. She frightens and inspires me all at the same time. Great job. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha