Memories

Memories

A Poem by Tamme

My mind is closed today
Envisioning a place I wish to stay
Most of the time when the sky is gray
Only then is my heart set free to play
Reality is likely to unravel and fray
I know over time the glow will decay
Elsewhere the emotions fade away
Sending me home 'til my next stray.

© 2008 Tamme


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a beautiful acrostics... this is awesome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


You should play more often it is good.Well done

Posted 16 Years Ago


A nice Acrostic - Well done :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simple and I agree an elegant read. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a really cool piece! I like the format and flow of this one. It's very simple yet elegantly written. Great read!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It has a musical feel to it- and it's really good. I really like it

Posted 16 Years Ago


This read very musical. Like there sound be a song playing in the backgorund as I read this. I liked you your playing around here. It was a fantastic image that you painted with your words. I think you have a talent for writing in such a way that everyone can enjoy it. From young to old and everyone in between.


Great Job!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Tamme

Poconos, PA



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