It's a wonderful life

It's a wonderful life

A Poem by tanmay7551
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Positives of a bankrupt person.

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No bucks in purse

No friends to stand by

Bankrupt, I am

House sold, Car taken.

It’s a wonderful life, take me to a primitive age.

 

Death is the end

The journey has begun.

With no constraints for time

I least care whether today or tomorrow.

It’s a wonderful life, I love to live my life.

 

Ministers advice

Outcry of kingdom awaits

Neighbours attack

King is bound by duties

But I have freedom at disposal

It’s a wonderful life, I feel above all kings.

 

Sounds of coins

Glitters of gold

Bought me love.

She has now betrayed.

But my feelings still overflows.

It’s a wonderful life, guide me to real love.

 

Courage in veins

Knowledge in brain

Love in heart

Faith in God

Richer than rich.

It’s a wonderful life, I will regain what lost.

 

 

 

 


© 2016 tanmay7551



Author's Note

tanmay7551
Positive attitude of a bankrupt person

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An uplifting message spoken through eloquently written words. Flows easily and I like how each stanza ends in a similar style but differs to match each individually.

As Stephen King said:" Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things." Great writing, thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thank you Jack for reviewing my work and I am glad that you liked it!
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

10 Months Ago

I did and you're welcome!



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Some people are so poor that all they have is money

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

True, they only have money. There are some people engaged in farming who are just working on contrac.. read more
D. Connolly

10 Months Ago

Very true. Having lived on both sides of this; money and no money, I would choose peace in my heart .. read more
tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Agreed, practical living in this fast moving life without cash is difficult. Let's close on with No .. read more
An uplifting message spoken through eloquently written words. Flows easily and I like how each stanza ends in a similar style but differs to match each individually.

As Stephen King said:" Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things." Great writing, thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thank you Jack for reviewing my work and I am glad that you liked it!
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

10 Months Ago

I did and you're welcome!
Wonderful poem! I enjoyed it reading.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Bela for the review.
Imbued with optimism, a brilliant write. I really loved this line : "I feel above all kings". The diction is simple but powerfully used. The last stanza just hits it- the quintessential things required to gain back what one has lost.
A very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I am glad that you liked my poem.
The dark story

10 Months Ago

It's a pleasure to read it :)
i went through this...we have to have faith in ourselves and positiveness to start over...
and the first part of that is simply appreciating that we are alive...

j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thanks J for your inputs, inspiring!
Good job!!
Your concept came out nicely.
Could've included more articles. Or maybe an "A" or "an" in some places.
Well done, keep writing!!


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thanks Devanshi for your constructive review... Will try to include changes mentioned in upcoming po.. read more
This is such a beautiful piece. For me it is not just positive attitude. I also see the beauty in "life of austerity". It flows well too...An amazing job.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

Thanks. I am glad that you liked it...

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bangalore, KR, India



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