The Wise Men of Mandala

The Wise Men of Mandala

A Poem by tanmay7551

"Mandala" Sanskrit word in positive means representation of cosmos or universe and in other means "Society", "Circle" or "Group".


Thorns pricked, heart bleed

within my mind.

Wise men’s sarcastic words echoed.

Glutton they are,

Feasting on the broken heart.

Cursed to be born in Mandala tribe

I - Nothing but a pawn.

Potion of discrimination

Cannot be digested anymore.

Love of my life awaits

my choice of our fate.

“Only fools, driven by heart!”,

they mocked - The Wise men of Mandala.

Wait no more, flush the rust

I ignored and escaped.

Guided by the mother Moon

Supported by sisters stars

Conscience needed no compass.

Merging into mute waves of love

Mind filled with sense of felony

But heart chuckled, over "

The Wise men of Mandala.


© 2016 tanmay7551

Author's Note

Innocent youth escaping the discriminations of Mandala - "Society" and uniting with his beloved.

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Some of life has no social standing here on earth. Luckily in Heaven we all will be the same value. Valentine

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1 Year Ago

You are right, heaven only seems the right place where all will be treated equally and there will no.. read more
A wild and dangerous journey to one's freedom of soul. Where the life bears no tag and the soul not looted by dark. Loved the way you have penned it down.
"Conscience needed no compass" a very strong and thought-provoking line.
An amazing write.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words, they speak poetry of their own!

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Added on December 4, 2016
Last Updated on December 4, 2016
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bangalore, KR, India

Sentimental, spendthrift and inconsistent. Will Power to overcome former 3 mentioned in progress! more..