Time is the only enemy

Time is the only enemy

A Poem by tanmay7551
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We fight, argue and have a bad time with some people only to understand sometimes that it was the time that did the trick...!

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Fallen from my grace

Not worthy to embrace

For all the mistakes committed,

Cynical people never submitted.

 

Neighbours shout, friends cries,

Few deceives, few betrays,

Back-stabbed, false pride,

Politics hurts at work

Policies of leaders - I am depressed!

I can’t bare them all.

Life at pace, tired and done,

 

All enemies? I know naught.

Gazing at the stars, vertigo attacks

Blackout in my mind, unconscious awake.

His words reminded, penetrated my soul -

“Father, forgive them, for they do not know what they do.”

 

Tempted to obedience, glory for the soul,

Forgiveness on the cards,

Job description �" “Requirement to fill the void”

Soul knew, heart refused, mind authorized �"

Time is the only enemy!

© 2016 tanmay7551


Author's Note

tanmay7551
Christmas is coming! Reminded me of Jesus's words about forgiveness. Sometimes, it is not the people but Time is the only enemy!

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WOW!!! THIS one is so amazing, I agree time is our enemy.
SO well expressed, very talented

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautifully perceptive and poignant for this season of the year. Bravo! ~Sharon

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

7 Years Ago

Thanks Sharon for the review!
Miss Sharon

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome my friend. ~Sharon
Ahh, so true. I love this line
"Soul knew, heart refused, mind authorized"


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tanmay7551

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much and I am glad that you liked it!

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