#11,408

#11,408

A Poem by d. c. smith

The space changes

And the youth changes

And the dog's face changes

And the green front yard changes

And the Chief changes

And the traffic changes

But the wars don't change

And I don't change

© 2009 d. c. smith


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Yes some things do change while others seem to stay the same.
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cool. If I were writing this, though, I'd probably say that traffic doesn't change, and that war and I do change.
Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by d. c. smith