For Only Him

I am chained to a love

In a whirlwind my mind spins

That I can not control

My thoughts, my dreams

He's always within,

A place I feel the need to be

Under lock

For he holds the key

To my heart, my soul

Our destiny,

I long for his arrival

Not matter how much

Time it takes

For only him

My love awaits.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i know what it feels like to feel this way about someone. i used to write my version of this all the time, but i must confess that your version is so very romantic and timeless. i think you should enter this one into as many contests as you can find. it is a winner!

[Tarry Franck]

Awe - thank you so much!!! I shall take your advice!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. God to know and appreciate the gifts of love. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Mia]

This is very beautiful and romantic...I especially love the last two lines...you love waits...that doesn't happen too often and that makes this classic love. Lasting love. This is a real winner :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :))))))

[Damien Davison]

This was good because, well for one it was written well, and secondly you didn't drag it on, as with love poems I find myself doing. It was a great little piece!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you soooo much :)

[TPK Stories]

I know exactly how you feel...I feel exactly the same way about the love of my life...lovely and so romantic...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!

[luviva]

wow.. he is lucky!!

[Tarry Franck]

Awe - thank you

[Lover Of Words]

He is quite lucky.. even though i know who this is for :))))

[Tarry Franck]

:))))

[erica]

very nice write...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)))))

[erica]

welcome...any time

[Hamza]

positive and beautiful ...
cheers to this attitude towards life because looking forwards with a hope leaves a smile, and endless smile on our face and a satisfaction within ..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Lover Of Words]

OH MY OH MY OMG!!!!! I AM With out worlds this is so fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!

[Lover Of Words]

I LOVE This!!!! oh and you too!

[DrD]

Nostalgic and sensitive, you capture a longing and desire known to so many. You have given it a touch of eloquence that makes it a delightful read.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - Such a great review. I can't thank you enough for such kind words. :) You just made my night.