Blind Beauty

Blind Beauty

A Poem by Tarry Franck

Hey there my lady
Where have you been all my life
Hiding that voluptuous body
Those beautiful green eyes
Yet you were before me
All this time,
How could I have overlooked
What was right in front
The beauty you hold
I see such comfort,
I must have been
Dancing in the darkness
As you were shining
In such illuminating light,
Why didn't I ever see you
Through those darkened nights
Or notice when
You lit the morning dew,
I've waited many moons
To find someone
And here before me you stand
Now I feel, "Oh, so blessed"
Since you have taken my hand.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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This is a very beatuiful peice it is always takes a while too realize that you have someone you have been looking for so long knowing they have been in front of you for long is blinding and surprising all in one.. I find this peice trimendous! Its always good too know that you have somone too take your hand.... An amazing poem i have too say :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks dear :)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)



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This so such a beautiful piece. Nicely written :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Very beautiful...lovely writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
I like the poem. The good description lead the reader on a good journey to know real beauty and fall into a blessed love. Life is odd. The good people in life can be near and we are blind to their love and kindness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I so agree - Glad you enjoyed the advice
Voluptuous with green eyes sounds like a good combination to me, it is so easy to overlook what we have got and take it for granted. This poem has corrected that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks
good piece good formatting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
We do live "blind" so often.
I wnjoyed the expression.
I had issue with a few lines...
"Are notice when" Our notice maybe...
Also, the line "Now I feel oh so blessed" Needs something.... Like, Now I feel, "Oh, so blessed" Maybe that is bad advice... something felt off to me there.
Overall liked this though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Wouldn't want anything less. ;)
 David Scott

11 Years Ago

I do like it better BTW.
That's how it shall be then.
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I do to thank you again for pointing that out. You're the best! You made it much better for me. ;)
Beautiful and intimate. Loved this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you - glad you enjoyed!
Utterly romantic. So often we can't see what's right in front of our faces. Sometimes we get lucky and our eyes are opened. Nicely pen'd.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
such a wonderful, beautiful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
So beautiful and Romantic :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Jordan's Back

11 Years Ago

Always

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