The Truth

The bridge is burning

No way to cross

My love you are yearning

But has been forever lost,

Did it even exist

I ponder

But no matter

Far away I begin to wander,

The flames are so high

They guide my way

Through the sliver moonlit night,

I run as fast as I can

Hoping you don't figure a way

To follow me

You need to stop and realize

I'm not a part of your destiny,

My heart belongs to another

I can't express that enough

So I'm burning this bridge

To prove to you

When I say enough is enough

I speak the truth.

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

Another poem I can relate too. You seen to know exactly how I'm feeling.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and you have no idea how that makes me feel to know that I can touch someone else with my writings :)

[marie]

your fear and hope is so strong in this i love it:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

no problem

[Jordan's Back]

I love this piece, its shows that your not gonna set there and teeter of the Rickety old bride, your gonna burn it down and forget about the land once visited, Excellent!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you love your review

[luviva]

uhmmm
ok you do speak the truth but some people do not really get it you know!!
so burning the bridge is a real sign... great for you gal..
love your expressivfe poems!!
continue writing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[quinfinn]

this is more like it Tarry. felt good to release that negative energy, did it not? these are the best writes ever, those that come from that place which is uniquely you. very cleverly written!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Quin :) And yes it felt good to release it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know your places and to control your desire. I like the decision made in this poem. Hard to walk the proper road. Bad decisions lead us to bad endings. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Lot of frustation, yet I feel hesitation in this write.

'I ponder
But no matter
Far away I begin to wander'

Burning bridges is always the point of no return, we have to do which bridges to take and which to leave behind. Nice write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

Dang. They just don't get it!
Sucks for both. Bridges are hard to build. Such a waste to have to burn it down.
Gotta do it though. Torch it!

[Tarry Franck]

:) Thanks

[Lucien Maier]

good write great emotion and frustration through out.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

This is something that i see out of you all the time and i am quite glad you put it in a poem It is just yet another amazing peice of the woman you are.... I love this one

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)