Rage of Tears

Rage of Tears

A Poem by Tarry Franck

Place in to position
To wage: Teenage Mannerism
A common day affair
Some beg to differ

Weakness that grants
Us - Them
The power
It is - We - 
That makes - Us - stronger
Not what devours
Not what devours

A war on nerves
They seem to play
Five minutes alone
Taken day by day
Taken day by day

A common day affair
That turns into
A modern day warfare,

A jungle of lives
Tossed and mangled
Bruised and battered
Never seems to cease
Until a bullet from
"So called " peers
Enters our youth
Creating an endless
Rage of tears.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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You put a lot into this poem. A young person life is hard today. Many choices and opportunity. Good and bad. Basic of life is good days and bad. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"A common day affair
That turns into
A modern day warfare,"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) And yes I did put into this poem :)



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An excellent write, absolutely well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Ethale Captor

11 Years Ago

'Twas no problem.
Very well said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
I think you did a fine job here. I will stop with that tonight.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Ahhh youth, we got it bad don't we? Some much backstabbing, hurtful words, and people just trying to play the social game. great piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Love it :) Yet again but keeping them coming!
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

My reviews or hurtful words?? I sure hope you mean the former ;)
really enjoyed your write, especially the last paragraph.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Ha, good topic, I can see Eminem rapping this one! You just can't win with teens, your only revenge is when they have their own, and wage their own battles. Good old parental pfft! That stage definitely lasts too freaking long! Nice read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
being a teenager is a b***h, i remember. teenagers are ego driven, know it all, and terrified of peer pressure. they are exploited by every venue of society, think about that for a minute and marinade on it. they are a joy, a pain in the a*s and the future of our society...how much more pressure could they handle? this is a glorious write, Tarry

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend :)
It is very hard on our young people as it was hard on us as teens. Teenagers can be so cruel. Well written Tarry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!!!
there is alot of emotion through this write, very well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Love the repetition of those two lines at the end of the stanzas. (Second and third) One of my favorites from you, it's impeccable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank so much :)

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