Unveil

Release your fears

Dry those tears

Show all the beauty within

As well as without

Extend a hand to another

To unveil the beauty of each other

Allow a smile

That's soon followed by laughter

Let them see

Within and without

You can be free

Beyond the veil.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description and the desire of the poem.
"As well as without
Extend a hand to another
To unveil the beauty of the each other
Allow a smile"
I like the strong ending to the excellent poem. Good to see what is hidden inside the veil.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Coyote! Perfect timing ~~ I needed the smile. Thanks again.

[beautiful dreamer]

i love this poem! great write tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear! Hope you are feeling better. Remember if you ever need to talk I'm just a mouse away.

[beautiful dreamer]

thank you so much tarry! you and kels are such a blessing to have :)

[Tarry Franck]

You are a blessing to us too dear :)

[beautiful dreamer]

awww thank you

[marie]

great job, though i kind of think you could add more to it, feels a little unfinished

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

no prob:)

[teardrop]

amazing and inspirational.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[TPK Stories]

I love the beauty of compassion this tells us...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

be real with me and i will be myself with you...very nice thought. too bad people exist under facades and umbrellas of mistrust and fear. this is what we are taught by the news media...from a young age. it is a nice thing to be able to reveal and have revealed to you those innermost feelings and our true natures. very good write!

[Tarry Franck]

thank you so much :)

[David Scott]

Ah yes... A fine way to say, "show me yours and I'll show you mine". ;-)
Just being light hearted...
Enjoyed the poem very much.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!!! :)

[Lover Of Words]

Love this one!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear :)

[Lover Of Words]

My greatest pleasure! :)

[Frieda P]

Love this one, what's behind that veil of secrecy...that Phantom of a smile. You got to the guts of it with this short read. Nicely done, kudos!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you. That helps a lot - I was worried

[Frieda P]

No worries, great one!