To The Core

Your voice sends vibes

That just make me want to dance...

I want to dance

Within you, upon you

And transcend

Run in the rain

To freshen our skin

Ravage each other

Like there is no end,

Frolic within the woods

Roll through the terrain

Wanting nothing to refrain,

We could climb to a mountain

To feel the breeze

Overlooking the great divine

Cuddle in love

Just you and me,

Who knows

We could end up like the volcano that roars

You and me

Rockin' it to the core.

Reviews

[Leigh]

There is an amazing display of how you feel in this, you have really converted your strong heartfelt emotions into powerful words of a tribute to your love. A most powerful metaphor of a red hot rockin' volcano is original, very thought provoking and full of beautiful imagery.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the hope and positive energy of the poem. Good to be set afire and willing to dance in the flame of the heat. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[quinfinn]

truly volcanic and just waiting to erupt with passion! some of your writes get right under my skin. this is one of those. excellent!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you quin - love to get under your skin. Rhymed and didn't even mean to ;-)
Glad you enjoyed

[TPK Stories]

Wow! So romantic

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena :)

[luviva]

ohh how great and dont know what to say really.
but hey, rock it to the core. thats if you stilll can coz i doesnot last forever

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for the review hmmm, I think ;)

[Holly Mason]

this paints such a romance between two
thank you for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - and thank you for reviewing :)

[David Scott]

The magma will boil if not allowed to released. I wish for you the hot springs of love and the escape from the destruction of the constand mind blowing eruptions of passion. Still, I hope little jagged egdes still get blown into the atmosphere from time to time as well... ;)
I enjoyed your write today. Have a passion and love filled day!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much - very thought provoking review - I'm very thankful :)

[marie]

great job:) i love it:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!!!!!

[marie]

no problem:)

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[marie]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

This just blew me out of the water such beauty!


To feel the breeze
Overlooking the great divine
Cuddle in love
Just you and me,
Who knows
We could end up like the volcano that roars
You and me
Rockin' it to the core.

Pure beauty

[Tarry Franck]

So glad you like it - Thank you so much darling :)

[Lover Of Words]

Its pure beauty.. Like the woman who wrote it :) Your welcome :)

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - You're the best ;)

[Lover Of Words]

Well i have to say I do have the most amazing aunt in every way possible! :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sweetie - my little angel :)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you for being so amazing with your words, and your love i so greatfully get to witness from such a great person! Your angel i will always be

[Frieda P]

So much great poetry on the WC today, and this is not exception....and you hooked me with 'dance' immediately, you know that's the way to my heart!

I want to dance
Within you, upon you
And transcend
Run in the rain
To freshen our skin

Seriously? Love this! Wowza.....!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Frieda - that means so much to me - and I love to dance as well :)

[Frieda P]

So lets run in the rain and freshen our skin eh? ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Posted this already but it didn't show up. So would love to. Tell me when, where, and what time ;-)