Moving On

I once had a lover

That embraced me 

Beneath warm covers,

Where he resides

I no longer know

What I do know is he's no longer by my side,

He's no longer my lover

So I assume

He's with another,

My nights are lonely but I stay strong

No rest for the weary

Time to move on.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Great motivation and keep going on...because one day he'll know the worth of youse if he was wrong.
nice piece of write, you jotted what your heart got and what life gave you with pain.but don;t you forget...everything happens for a reason..so, you're going right.don't stop, life' has no limit...break youse limits and get the way to live.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Rahul

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Sometime faces appear. I would love to have a cup of coffee and a conversation with a old lover. Would be interesting to see where they landed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Blotter]

simple, clean... well put.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Definitely a relatable concept...the loss of a lover and the musings of what the lover is doing now, without you. I also like the feeling of this one, it read well, save for a few formatting issues. I think that you may do well to put a space between the lines "I no longer know" and "What I do know is he's no longer by my side,"--this area gave me a little trouble in terms of flow. Other than that, well done!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[OBWhiteHawk]

Very good I like the emotions and I like the rhyming pattern you have going here. It's so hard to lose someone that you love.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Graveyardfuck]

Love this. If only I had that kind of mind set.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[TPK Stories]

May you gain the strength you need to move on. . .excellent write! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[quinfinn]

hard to forget those old lovers, especially those who left a real and lasting impression on both our hearts and our psyches, but, as you so eloquently state, sometimes you just gotta move on......NEXT!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Absolutely

[Lover Of Words]

Stay strong my dear this is one for the books for sure i love the emotion you put in it i have seen you put alot into your words lately and this one just pops out on the page... Seeing this on a regular basis from you now your writes get more amazing as i see each one.... And though i am related i am a huge fan of this one and i am glad to see you writing again not just good pieces but AMAZING pieces I Love it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

Your very welcome

[Frieda P]

This vibrates on the page Tarry...it's never easy is it? Good to see you again my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Frieda

[Frieda P]

Lovin' the new pic, my pleasure!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you