Dark Beauty

She majestically walks across the room

In a flowing cape

That blossoms with doom,

You bow down

When you cross her path

Due to her powers

You are bound,

By what she unleashes

And leaves you wanting more 

Due to the dark beauty

She so delicately releases.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The strong description create beauty and mystery. You create good visions and places with your words. I like the dark beauty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Always a pleasure to read your words. Good to see your name appear upon the board.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Coyote. Feels good to be back.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to read your words. Send me read requests. I will read sooner or later. I still work the terrible job,

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Mysterious, haunting and beautiful. Good use of brevity. The complete package.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[TPK Stories]

The power of a beautiful woman...excellent write, Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Michael G. Smith]

This sounds like tease to a good story.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Michael

[Eddie Phillips]

This has a great use of imagery and story. It is both foreboding and alluring at the same time. The dark beauty is a trap that is elegantly described in your poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Eddie

[Lover Of Words]

This is so beautiful. I love it.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Kelsey

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Sounds of a lady id rather not cross, I have to many bad experiences already.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for reviewing

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Your welcome Tarry