Move Me

Move Me

A Poem by Tarry Franck

You move my spirit in such a good way
Just talking to you
Makes my day,
You lift me
In ways you can't imagine
You set my worries free,
You make the moon rises
And the sunsets
Special to me
Thank you for being in my life,
I want to wrap around you, my soul
Hopefully you don't feel that is too forward
Or too bold,
I can't help the way you make me feel
For I do believe it's my heart
That you are trying to steal.

© 2014 Tarry Franck


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A beautiful and direct poem. We need good words to open door to steal a heart. Had to do sometimes. I like the tone of the poem leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful and loving poem today. I enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Willweb
A great poem on love Tarry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Eddie
I like the last two lines,

"For I do believe it's my heart
That you are trying to steal."

Isn't that what love does? Steals our heart?

Excellent write....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Starrleena
This is so sweet and passionate! Love the straight forward honesty! Thanks for requesting

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jack

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

LA, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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