I Will Hold

A man I never meant to hurt

And I feel so bad

I want to make things right

And don't want him to be sad,

I would love to change things

And don't know exactly what to do

Except be totally honest with him

To his heart, to my heart, be true,

He deserves better in my eyes

I didn't mean to do what I did

But there was no way

Any of this I was going to keep hid

He is owed the truth for he's a great person

Such a wonderful man with a kind soul

I don't want anymore damages done

Forever in my heart, he I will hold.

Reviews

[Chris Atkinson]

beautiful and emotional piece Tarry. We all have regrets and times we wish Doc would show up in the deloreant so we could go back and change them but we just have to learn from these times and our mistakes and look at them as lessons. it makes us better people and we will be wiser in the future. its so hard leating someone go under those surcumstances and you have like alwys, described it perfectly. great work.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem. I hold a lot of regret.
"I don't want anymore damages done
Forever in my heart, he I will hold."
If I could go back in time. I would of been kinder. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TPK Stories]

We all have regrets in life and learning from those mistakes...another great write...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Purbleazaleya]

A very emotional poem. This shows the regret of the writer perfectly. She regrets that she hurt her partner and wished she didn't do so. Thus, she doesn't want to torture him any longer and lets him go so that he can find a better person out there

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[willweb]

This poem is heart felt and seems extremely sincere to me. I hope that you find a way to repair this situation. I enjoyed reading this today and am sorry for your sadness.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much