Back Bend

An idle mind

That I don't care for

Raises thoughts

That I don't like,

I'm trying my best to gain control

But spinning frantically

Is not only my mind

It's my heart and my soul,

Don't like where this may end

But my life is reflective

Of a back bend,

I beg for someone to intercede

But want nobody around

Because on their soul

It will most certainly feed.

Reviews

[Purbleazaleya]

I really liked how this can relate to many of us. When we are alone with nothing to do, we will think back and eventually dwell on unpleasant memories. At that time, all we wish is for someone to come along and distract us, because we feel so negative when we recall back all the unpleasant stuff from the past.

[Tarry Franck]

Yes indeed. Thank you for reviewing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and emotion in the poem.
"I beg for someone to intercede
But want nobody around
Because on their soul
It will most certainly feed."
I understand the above lines. Sometime we must ourselves. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TPK Stories]

It's hard to find that control that we lost...good poem...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Chris Atkinson]

past memmories can ake us cringe and are hearts ache but always keep the faith Tarry, for every bad time we have theres a good one around the corner. "The bad times will always lead to the good and the good times we will always remmember with love"
very well writen and heart felt as always Tarry, keep the faith :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Chris

[willweb]

I like how you have displayed your thoughts in this poem, but it seems that you are in a dark place. I hope some light shines on you soon.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend