Closing Every Door

Wrapped around my mind

Are these thoughts I can not control

And they are honing in on my time,

Writing is the only therapy

As of now

And that's not even working

I can't break free,

I'm bound by mental chains

That won't leave me alone

So in bondage I remain,

Happiness no longer lives

Inside of me

For whatever reason

These thoughts won't give,

I'm scared and just want to run

Even though I know they follow

I'm doing what can only be done,

Go to the shore

Watch the ebb and flow

And hope happiness will return

Or I will end up closing

Every door.

Reviews

[Chris Atkinson]

Beatiful and dark piece Tarry, as always briming woth raw emotion. This is realy well writen Tarry, you have a good talent. These bad times are what make us, its hard to see at the time but, the bad times will always lead to the good. Life is an insane journey thats filled with mistakes, good times, bad times, hopes, dreams and love. Just always stay possitive and learn from mistakes and it will all come good in the end :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Chris

[costa siwale]

And this is why I like your poems, despair, grim and an air of faint hope. Well written

[Coyote Poetry]

It is sad when we lose the doors. Life should be lived. We shouldn't be locked in. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I hope you are okay my friend.
Coyote

[TPK Stories]

I know how it feels when we feel like we're trapped within our thoughts...hope you find some peace...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[Purbleazaleya]

Very beautiful and descriptive of one's feelings. This really conveys the sorrow and the feeling of being stuck there, hoping you can move on to happier days

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Purbleazaleya