Cleansing

Cleansing

A Poem by Tarry Franck

A heavy down pour
Makes my soul 
Want to soar,
To feel the rain
Cleanse my soul
Release all my pain,
If I could only take flight
And it would be a reality
How good it would make my life,
But as I sit here
Listening to it under a tin roof
It's stirring my spirit
Releasing my fears,
So instead I decide to dance within
Hoping my imperfections
Will be cleansed.

© 2014 Tarry Franck



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this is a refreshing read.. eloquent

Posted 1 Year Ago


Try to keep in step with the rhythms, right?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Right Michael
Excellent metaphor, beautiful expressions, great flow

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Linda
Linda alexander

3 Years Ago

You welcome, take care
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Ty
Great job depicting that search for a clean soul. I love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ty
You must have written this during the early morning hours while watching the rain. Let me tell you something my dear friend this is awesome!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kelsey
dance dance dance...what a perfect way to cleanse our imperfections....beautiful...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Valerie
"So instead I decide to dance within
Hoping my imperfections
Will be cleansed."
Good to dance and try to be cleansed. Hard to do. I like the thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the poetry.
Coyote


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Tarry Franck
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