Regain Control

Regain Control

A Poem by Tarry Franck

I let you enter my life
Not knowing what
You would cause
Now I stand on a ledge
Approaching a jump
Is what I pledge,
How I let you control me
I don't know
I feel like I'm burning within
With so much uncertainty
Hoping spontaneous combustion will begin,
My head spins on its axis
Not knowing if I will ever
Get a grip
And plant my nerves solid
This is going to be a long endeavor,
I don't know if I have what it takes
To regain control
Of my mind
My body
My soul.

© 2014 Tarry Franck



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Reminds me of 'How wild it is just to let life be' from the book Wild by Sheryl Strayed.

Strong poem, well done. It shows inner turmoil.

Could you review me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


To regain control
Of my mind
My body
My soul.
i like your work, its inspirational, and am glad i read this because am at a point in my life when i need to regain control.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you and good luck dear friend
Sbwats

1 Year Ago

I enjoyed that
Very interesting piece.
It elaborates those few moments when you feel you have lost yourself due to love.
I enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Angad
A powerful poem my missed friend.
"To regain control
Of my mind
My body
My soul"
Once took me five years to gain my sanity. Love can lead us to madness and sweet places. Hard to regain sanity. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Well expressed. This one spoke to me on a personal level. I, too, once stood on such a ledge. Leapt and went SPLAT!. Fortunately no spontaneous combustion was involved. I suspect this is a quite common human experience. Again, well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you ImSJ
I've felt like this many times...excellent Tarry

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you for understanding Valerie
Grip it and rip it sister!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

3 Years Ago

Thank you Cory

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